I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

Last Updated: 02.07.2025 16:58

I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

He is always late

He's always helping his ex

He always cracks his knuckles.

Do you anal play alone?

He's always the last one to leave a party

He's never available on Saturdays

He doesn't like her cat

Do you think there will ever be a movie that features a line such as “You graduated at the top of your class in liberal arts, we need your help”?

He forgets his wallet